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Saturday, June 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday, a taste of "Sunny Days, Moonlit Nights"

A short explanation:
Mike returns home after kissing Sunny. He's walking his mixed breed dogs late at night, thinking about her.

He could hardly take his eyes off her when they were
together. She was so lovely, her eyes shining her internal sunlight
and her smile wide…and her body. He wanted so much to touch her, but he didn’t want to push her or rush her into a physical
relationship. It had to be right.
Part of him wanted to end it: romance was often more trouble than it was worth. But maybe not this time.


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27 comments:

  1. Great six, Jean! Looking forward to next week.

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  2. Enjoyed the six! Excited to read more.

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  3. Patience is a virtue and romance is way underrated! Great ink!

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  4. Thank you all for your kind comments. "Sunny Days," is a very romantic story, with a little heartbreak and danger thrown in. Thanks for stopping by.

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  5. Great six! love it when a man wants to start things right :)

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  6. Ooh, internal sunlight! He has a way with words. Or rather, you do!

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  7. Very nice scene. I enjoyed it a lot.

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  8. Rebecca, I can't take credit. Those were his words exactly. LOL. Glad you all like the six.

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  9. Wonderful six. You set up a beautiful scene that gave truth to his thoughts. Thank you.

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  10. I love this scene. Your description is beautiful and original, especially "internal sunlight." Very nice.

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  11. *sigh* he sounds like a real gent! Lovely, Jean, just lovely!

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  12. Oh yeah, Mike is seriously hook. lol

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  13. Thank you, Sandy. That's how she got the name Sunny from her dad. Yes, JoAnne, he is a true gent, a great hero. He's hooked but it's a rocky road. Thank you all for your kind comments.

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  14. No! Don't let him stop! Great six, Jean!

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  15. I'll tell him you said he shouldn't back away. I have a feeling he's too far gone already! Thanks for your great comment., B.G.

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  16. "Romance was often more trouble than it was worth." - how true! Great snippet!

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  17. No - don't let him end it!
    Great six :)

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  18. Don't worry. I'm going to let Mike get away! Thanks for stopping by and leaving

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  19. Seems like a really nice guy and one I would want to keep reading.

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  20. Thanks, Rebecca. He is a really nice guy, the kind in short supply these days. Thanks for stopping by.

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