Welcome! This week is picture prompt week. This picture reminded me of a story I've been sharing on Tuesday Tales, so I thought I'd continue. No more than 300 words, here it is.
Dale decided walk to clear her head. The
sun was still bright as she wandered down Little Pond Road. She hadn’t seen
Cliff in over twenty years, yet she could still pick him out of a crowd. He hasn’t changed much. A touch of gray in
his hair, maybe. She couldn't forget the way his eyes looked at her, startled at first then a
flash of pain. What’s he got to be hurt
about? I’m the one who got dumped.
Footsteps behind her unleashed adrenaline into her
blood as fear pulsed through her body. She turned to face the intruder, a tall
man.
“What are you doing here?” He asked.
“I might ask you the same thing, Cliff,” she responded.
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A tightness in her chest reminded her. She was
surprised her heart had not healed completely. A tiny ache still pulsed there.
She looked across the field, trying to divert her attention from the fact that
her heart rate had kicked up the second she laid eyes on him. She had to admit
to herself her feelings for Cliff had never died completely. She shook her
head, a rueful smile on her lips. I’m
just a stupid romantic. He picked someone else. Get over it already. It’s been
forever.
Lost in thought, she let her feet guide her. At the bottom
of the dead end road, she stopped abruptly. There it was, McCauley’s barn. The
ramshackle building had deteriorated since her high school days. Cautiously,
she approached, opening the door slowly. The damp, dank smell of rotting hay
and horse manure stung her nose. This had been their secret meeting place. They
first made out in this rickety old barn. And it was here where she gave Cliff
her virginity. Dale sighed, remembering their passionate nights.“What are you doing here?” He asked.
“I might ask you the same thing, Cliff,” she responded.
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10 comments:
Love how you bring us gently to the edge then turn away leaving us hanging.
Kudos.
Drat. Now we have to wait until next week to hear what they say to each other! =)
Ooh.. This could get heated.. In a nice way I mean.. Obviously something still there for them both..x
Oooh, their old meeting place. What will this mean for them. ~sigh~
wow, I want to know how this meeting will go. this snippet makes me think of love's long gone and how I would react to seeing someone from my past. Great TT
Woo hoo, the tension builds. :)
I'm dying to know what they say to each other - way to leave us waiting!
I enjoyed the lush details and the irony of the couple reuniting at the barn where they first became lovers.
Coincidence? I don't think so. Both want to reminisce the past! Love it.
Love it!! Wonder what's happening next in that barn??
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