Welcome! The prompt is "pretty". We're continuing with Buddy's Carruthers' story in First & Ten, football romance series. Caution: locker room language.
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Buddy stood on the field with his hand over his
heart, like his mother taught him, waiting for the national anthem. A female
trotted out on the field and the crowd went wild. Buddy rubbed his eyes. Tony Harrison, back-up quarterback stood next to him. “It’s Emerald. Shit, she’s hot.”
Buddy glared at him.
“Fuck it, man, she is. Don’t tell me you wouldn’t bang her.”
Buddy growled, “Shut the fuck up, asshole.”
“Okay, like you saw her first?” Tony raised his
palms.
“You don’t know how close to the truth you are.”Emerald began to sing. Both men quieted down. Buddy’s mind raced. A thousand thoughts flew by, like cuts in a music video. He had to see her, talk to her, kiss her pretty mouth.
“Emmie!” He called. No answer. Asshole. Her name is Emerald now.
“Emerald!” She turned her gaze on him. He lifted off his helmet and took a knee. She gasped, then mouthed his name as their gazes locked.
Buddy’s chest tightened. He could hardly breathe, his heart pumped so fast he could hear it. His palms sweated, like a twelve year old at his first dance. He rose and walked to the railing. She reached out and he clasped her hand in both of his.
“Wait. After the game. Please. I need to see you.
Talk to you.”
8 comments:
Ooh, he's been thinking of her, and now finally he gets to see and talk to her. I love her emotional reaction.
Oh, my heart fluttered when she mouthed his name. Love this start...Knowing you it's a rough road but I want to see more of these two for sure.
Oh man alive, what a great scene! Such emotion. I can`t wait to see what happens next.
I love it. The last paragraphs especially grabbed me.
Great scene! Loved that they finally see each other - great emotion & done in such a realistic way.
Great scene ... well done.
Love her reaction when she recognises him. Great tension in this scene.
Touching scene. My money is on Buddy.
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