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Saturday, June 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday, a taste of "Sunny Days, Moonlit Nights"

A short explanation:
Mike returns home after kissing Sunny. He's walking his mixed breed dogs late at night, thinking about her.

He could hardly take his eyes off her when they were
together. She was so lovely, her eyes shining her internal sunlight
and her smile wide…and her body. He wanted so much to touch her, but he didn’t want to push her or rush her into a physical
relationship. It had to be right.
Part of him wanted to end it: romance was often more trouble than it was worth. But maybe not this time.


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29 comments:

Elizabeth Black said...

Great six, Jean! Looking forward to next week.

Rawiya said...

Good six Jean!

Sam Crescent said...

you always have a beautiful six

Melynda Price said...

Enjoyed the six! Excited to read more.

Bree said...

Patience is a virtue and romance is way underrated! Great ink!

Jean said...

Thank you all for your kind comments. "Sunny Days," is a very romantic story, with a little heartbreak and danger thrown in. Thanks for stopping by.

Kellie Kamryn said...

Great six! love it when a man wants to start things right :)

Sarah Grimm said...

Great six! I really enjoyed it.

Sandra Sookoo said...

aww, what a sweet six!

Rebecca Gomez Farrell said...

Ooh, internal sunlight! He has a way with words. Or rather, you do!

Cara Bristol said...

Very nice scene. I enjoyed it a lot.

Jean said...

Rebecca, I can't take credit. Those were his words exactly. LOL. Glad you all like the six.

Alix said...

Wonderful six. You set up a beautiful scene that gave truth to his thoughts. Thank you.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

I love this scene. Your description is beautiful and original, especially "internal sunlight." Very nice.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

*sigh* he sounds like a real gent! Lovely, Jean, just lovely!

Trish said...

Oh yeah, Mike is seriously hook. lol

Lindsay said...

Love the six

Jean said...

Thank you, Sandy. That's how she got the name Sunny from her dad. Yes, JoAnne, he is a true gent, a great hero. He's hooked but it's a rocky road. Thank you all for your kind comments.

BG Lashbrooks said...

No! Don't let him stop! Great six, Jean!

Jean said...

I'll tell him you said he shouldn't back away. I have a feeling he's too far gone already! Thanks for your great comment., B.G.

Joanne Stewart said...

love that last line. Great six!

Jean said...

Thank you, Joanne.

gayleramage said...

"Romance was often more trouble than it was worth." - how true! Great snippet!

Jean said...

Thank you!

Xakara said...

It's worth it! So sweet. :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

No - don't let him end it!
Great six :)

Jean said...

Don't worry. I'm going to let Mike get away! Thanks for stopping by and leaving

Rebecca Royce said...

Seems like a really nice guy and one I would want to keep reading.

Jean said...

Thanks, Rebecca. He is a really nice guy, the kind in short supply these days. Thanks for stopping by.